Topic:
What a person can learn from the experience
of working holidays
Personal relation:
I am a person who loves traveling because I
think it is great chance to learn more from this world, especially the way how
people living in different places think. However, it is a little hard for
people to understand a place’s culture thoroughly by being a tourist and taking
a look at those tourist attractions.
Luckily, all the CAN’T can be done if people
go on another special kind of travel called “working holidays”. People can live
in the life how local people do, they can work for local agency, also, they
will broaden their horizons through the experience of working holiday.
Main idea:
People will broaden their horizons and become
more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.
Topic sentences
Topic sentence 1:
Many people gain an international
perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact
with foreigners and travel.
a. international perspective and getting
interact with foreigners
In a
new place, people will get to know its culture very soon because they are
exposed to it 24/7. Also, they will get interact with foreigners every day,
which makes them understand the way foreigners think.
b. the experience of working abroad
During their working holidays, they would
change their jobs after a short time. That means they might have a great
adaptability on working.
Topic sentence 2:
People will be more independent and
sophisticated through working holiday experiences because they don’t have
anyone to rely on.
a. independent
and sophisticated
People will become tough when it comes to
living in another country because they are forced to adapt to the new
environment as soon as possible. They need to manage their own time and money
with plans.
b. danger
Undoubtedly, when working in another
country, we may run into many kinds of dangers. People must strengthen their
ability to deal with them.
1.
The unexpected accidents occurred
frequently as the number of people who goes working holidays increase. ROC
representative office in Australia said that Taiwan's accidental death cases
occurred in Australia has added up to 10 cases so far this year, including car
accidents (4), drowning (3), suicide (2) and unknown reasons for sudden death
(1).
Ex: (1) A 23-year-old girl from South Korea
was murdered and being abandoned in the park during her working holiday to
Australia.
(2) A 23-year-old Taiwanese backpacker who works in an Australia meat
plant illicitly was accidentally fell into the boiler. After being rushed to the
hospital, the injury had no longer life-threatening, but the fee of helicopter which
took him to the hospital cost a total of NT $ 1.38 million.
2. Foreign
medical system generally applies only to the locals. If an accident occurs to foreigners,
the medical cost could be considerable.
Topic sentence 3:
The difficulties and frustrations during
working holidays will make people see life differently.
a. The
difficulties and frustrations
b. grow
up
They became empathetic to those in a lower
social status because they had experienced the toils. They found the real them
because no one will have expect on you in a new place. They can do something they
would never do in their hometown.
other suggestions by Hazel about the form of my presentation:
1. make the presentation more creative, catch people's attention.
2. play role-playing to make the audience understand what i am doing more clearly
