Topic, personal relation, main idea, and topic sentences

Topic:

What a person can learn from the experience of working holidays

 

Personal relation:

I am a person who loves traveling because I think it is great chance to learn more from this world, especially the way how people living in different places think. However, it is a little hard for people to understand a place’s culture thoroughly by being a tourist and taking a look at those tourist attractions.

Luckily, all the CAN’T can be done if people go on another special kind of travel called “working holidays”. People can live in the life how local people do, they can work for local agency, also, they will broaden their horizons through the experience of working holiday.

 

 

Main idea:

People will broaden their horizons and become more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.

 

Topic sentences

 

Topic sentence 1:

Many people gain an international perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact with foreigners and travel.

a. international perspective and getting interact with foreigners

 In a new place, people will get to know its culture very soon because they are exposed to it 24/7. Also, they will get interact with foreigners every day, which makes them understand the way foreigners think.

b. the experience of working abroad

During their working holidays, they would change their jobs after a short time. That means they might have a great adaptability on working.

Topic sentence 2:

People will be more independent and sophisticated through working holiday experiences because they don’t have anyone to rely on.

a.     independent and sophisticated

People will become tough when it comes to living in another country because they are forced to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. They need to manage their own time and money with plans.

 

b.     danger

Undoubtedly, when working in another country, we may run into many kinds of dangers. People must strengthen their ability to deal with them.  

1.      The unexpected accidents occurred frequently as the number of people who goes working holidays increase. ROC representative office in Australia said that Taiwan's accidental death cases occurred in Australia has added up to 10 cases so far this year, including car accidents (4), drowning (3), suicide (2) and unknown reasons for sudden death (1).

Ex: (1) A 23-year-old girl from South Korea was murdered and being abandoned in the park during her working holiday to Australia.

   (2) A 23-year-old Taiwanese backpacker who works in an Australia meat plant illicitly was accidentally fell into the boiler. After being rushed to the hospital, the injury had no longer life-threatening, but the fee of helicopter which took him to the hospital cost a total of NT $ 1.38 million.

2.  Foreign medical system generally applies only to the locals. If an accident occurs to foreigners, the medical cost could be considerable.

 

Topic sentence 3:

The difficulties and frustrations during working holidays will make people see life differently.

a.     The difficulties and frustrations

b.     grow up

They became empathetic to those in a lower social status because they had experienced the toils. They found the real them because no one will have expect on you in a new place. They can do something they would never do in their hometown.

other suggestions by Hazel about the form of my presentation:

1. make the presentation more creative, catch people's attention.

2. play role-playing to make the audience understand what i am doing more clearly