outline

Topic:

 

What a person can learn from the experience of working holidays

Main idea:

People will broaden their horizons and become more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.

 

Topic sentences

 

Topic sentence 1:

Many people gain an international perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact with foreigners and travel.

a.  international perspective and  getting interact with foreigners

 In a new place, people will get to know its culture very soon because the culture of that country are everywhere. Also, they will get interact with foreigners everyday which makes them understand the way how foreigners think.

b. the experience of working abroad
 

Topic sentence 2:

People will be more independent and sophisticated though working holiday experiences because they don’t have anyone to rely on.

a.      independent and sophisticated
       People will grow up at a rapid pace when it comes to living in another country because they are forced to adapt the new environment as soon as possible.

b.      danger
Undoubtly, working in another country may run into many kinds of danger. People must strengthen their ability to deal with them.

Topic sentence 3:

The difficulties and frustrations during working holidays will make people grow up.

a.      The difficulties and frustrations
ex: hardly communicate with other people...

b.      grow up

 

other suggestions by Hazel about the form of my presentation:

1. make the presentation more creative, catch people's attention.

2. play role-playing to make the audience understand what i am doing more clearly