Topic:
What a person can learn from the
experience of working holidays
Main idea:
People will broad their horizons and become
more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.
Topic sentences
Topic sentence 1:
Many people gain an international
perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact
with foreigners and travel.
Topic sentence 2:
People will be more independent and can deal
with things in a harmony way because when they were abroad, they didn’t have
anyone to rely on.
Topic sentence 3:
The differences and the similarities
between the experiences of those I interviewed and mine.
dear teacher:
回覆刪除i found a serious problem...
the B & Bs i found on the internet are not allowing me to go working holidays because whom they want are those over 20 years old.
so what can i do now?
Well, in worse case scenarios, we just do without that:)
回覆刪除We don't need a paragraph to compare the differences and similarities. These are the stories and examples you can use in every paragraph to back up the main idea.
Write a new topic sentence for paragraph 3.