a new topic sentence for paragraph 3

 

Topic:

 

What a person can learn from the experience of working holidays

Main idea:

 

People will broad their horizons and become more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.

 

Topic sentences

Topic sentence 1:

Many people gain an international perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact with foreigners and travel.

Topic sentence 2:

People will be more independent and can deal with things in a harmony way because when they were abroad, they didn’t have anyone to rely on.

Topic sentence 3:

People may go through many difficulties during their working holidays, so they may became to cherish everything after the trip.