Topic:
Working Holidays---another choice of
traveling
Main idea:
2. People’s feeling (including me)
Suggestions:
I didn’t talk a lot to Teacher Hazel so she
gave me only a few suggestions .
1.
Ask some questions at the
beginning of my presentation. Make people think about themselves. (like “what
will I do?”)
2.
Go working holiday in person
and record my feeling before, during, and after the trip.
I didn’t talk a lot to Teacher Hazel so she
gave me only a few suggestions .
1.
Ask some questions at the
beginning of my presentation. Make people think about themselves. (like “what
will I do?”)
2.
Go working holiday in person
and record my feeling before, during, and after the trip.
The topic is too broad. Your main idea sounds more like the topic.
回覆刪除Ex:
Topic: What a person can learn from the experience of working holidays
Main idea: (This has to be a sentence to includes all the main points you are going to talk about later.)
Ex: People will broad their horizons and become more independent and better motivated through the working holiday experiences.
Topic sentence for paragraph 1: Many people gain an international perspective after they've worked abroad for a year because they get to interact with foreigners and travel.
Topic sentence 2:
Topic sentence 3:
Post the new entry before Nov. 9 (Sunday).